The Attractive Winter Gardens

The Attractive Winter Gardens

The attractive Winter Gardens

It had beautiful, bright flowers

The Winter Gardens were beautiful

And the trees waved me in!

The attractive Winter Gardens

The elephants were colourful

The elephants quietly sneaked off

And the windows were as shiny as Big Ben!

The attractive Winter Gardens

The leaves were as green as a frog!

The Winter Garden’s trees were as tall as a skyscraper

The bark on the tree was as sharp as a bull’s horn!



Cohen got Amber Class Star Writer for his excellent work in Literacy! Cohen used personification, alliteration, descriptive language and lots of similes in his poem!

Well done Cohen!

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